Tuesday, May 1, 2012

Where I'm From







I Am From

I am from the all different kinds of sports fields, from dirt and grass
I am from the soft wooden floors with warm heaters
I am from the Rose of Sharon, the red maple leaves falling off the trees
I am from respect for elders and small eyes, from the Sons and the Hwangs
I am from the work-it-alls
And the never-give-ups
From respect and take one slow step at a time
I am from the cross where Jesus was crucified
I’m from cell phones with K-pop music,
I am from Kimbap heaven, kimbap and kimchie
From the trust of my parents whenever I needed it,
The lungs my father filled up with blackness to educate me and my brother
I am from my parent’s hard work
I am from tents that me and my brother made in out bedrooms,
That we lit with lamps and read books
I am from schools where teachers were
Strict
Mean
Boring
I’m from the memories of my youth  
England
Korea
Holland
England where I could smell the fresh air every morning
Korea where I felt safe
Holland where I could eat all sorts of cheese by just walking for a few minutes
I am from the English playing style
And the Korean playing style
Which are very different playing styles from each other
 I am from both sides the English and the American
I am from a small journalist club,
Going around Europe, Asia, America and South America
I am from a family that scarified many things for their next generations

12 comments:

  1. omg yujin this is beautiful. I AM LEGIT GOING TO GO CRY OR SOMETHING.

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  2. yujin i am very impress with your work is something out of this world ... i like how you describe how you have different style from the countries ...
    nicely done

    -Juan Carlos Pretelt

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  3. Wow yu-jin...I loved it :) I loved how you explained all the different places you are from, that you aren't only from one specific country or region.

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  4. yujin, i can kind of relate with your poem, really good, though K-pop...

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  5. Very good poem Yujin. I can see now all the places you have been to and know more about you. All in all its very good.

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    1. 유 - 진, 이거 꽤 괜찮 았어. Excellent job Yu-Jin. I liked how you used the poetic devices.

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    2. Well hi there Yu-Jin! Let me began by saying that I love how I had to click on a bunch of Korean signs until I found the one that means COMMENT. So thank you for making it hard for me! Now, I would like to compliment you on this amazing poem that literally captivates every little thing there is to know about you. The mixture of cultures makes the poem sound separate but linked together at the same time. Your line breaks are perfectly placed to give the reader a chance to analyze every word you say and adds emphasis to the different cultures you mention. Good Job Yu-JIn and by the way, you're a great poem writer too, and a great athlete as well <3

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  7. Thank you guys!!!
    Que cool comments from the top all the way down!!!

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  8. I really enjoyed you poems because it tells me a lot of your life before you came to Panama, the best country in the world. I really liked how without having to know you, someone can automatically know that you are from Asia. I liked how you prefly talked about the different morals that your family teacher you. I liked how you let us know that your family teaches you to never give up and that your goals are achieved with small steps. I liked how you listed the different countries that in open time you called home. I also liked the way you listed the attribute of your old teachers. I believe that listing things in a poem should be a strategy and if it is I will like to se it in my poem. I liked your final stanza were you talk about how you know the different ways of playing spots in the different countries you were. I believe that what you were saying was that people in the world are very different but they can coexist. Over all I believe you did a great job.

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  9. Yu-Jin awesome work! It is so coo. You tell us a lot about your life. All the places you have been and everything. You use poem devices which makes you poem better. Excellent Job!

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  10. I like how you mention all the countries you've lived in, i didn't even know! 난 순진 아직도 그래,하지만 좋은 시도 ... 또한, 당신은 내 연필을 잃었

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